Jimmy: So, no blinking?
Don't blink. Don't even blink. Blink and you're dead. They are- okay, I'm joking. (Bet you can't guess what my new fandom is. _Sorry.)
Also, nice reference to Frozen. One thing, though. The seme-uke thing is only in yaoi, not general slash. But nice job! I think you're getting used to these kind of fics.